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Memememememe

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meme :3 tell me what I improved on, and what I need help on
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The proportions in the after picture are a wonderful improvement from the first. The eyes are much more expressive and the hair has a lot more definition. I would suggest working a little bit more on the blending of colors together, making it just a little bit more seamless. This doesn't mean that you aren't doing a wonderful job right now- because honestly, it's really great. Especially in the gold in her dress and her hair.
I'd be curious to see how it turned out if you tried this drawing once more in a different medium, such as digital art or paint, etc.
The colors in both pieces are vibrant and the gold/yellow on the faerie really draw in your eye in contrast to the blue background, and adds the appearance that she is glowing.

I hope you continue drawing, the before/after idea is awesome. Well done!
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